Where we start
A bench is one message and a fixed set of rules, so that when two drafts score differently the only thing that differed was the writing. The message belongs to the running case: Lumen Logistics confirming Thursday's 3 pm meeting with Manager Wang of its Shanghai distributor, sending the draft contract, and asking him to look at the price clause first. The five drafts and the 43 markers are constructed and printed in full; nothing is hidden in a model.
★ What you walk out with tonight. The counted answer to "is this too casual for WeChat" for your own draft, the three swaps that move a word-for-word translation into the WeChat band, and the reason classical phrasing pasted into a message scores worse, not better.
Markers, an index, and a band per channel
6 min liveThe checker reads a draft for three kinds of marker. Casual ones pull it down, formal ones push it up, and over-formal ones, the classical words of a printed letter, push it up harder. The total becomes an index from 0 to 100, scaled by length so a long message is not formal just for being long. The channel then decides whether that index is right.
LiveThree kinds of marker, and why they are weighted3 min▶
Casual markers pull the index down: particles such as 啦 (la, casual particle) and 哦 (o, casual particle), laughter such as 哈哈 (hāha, ha ha), and casual words such as 咋样 (zǎyàng, how about it, casual) and 搞定 (gǎodìng, sorted, casual). 你 (nǐ, you) counts lightly, because it is correct in many places and wrong only in a first formal message.
Formal markers push it up: 您 (nín, you, polite), 贵公司 (guì gōngsī, your company, polite), 烦请 (fánqǐng, may I trouble you to), 请查收 (qǐng cháshōu, please find attached). Over-formal markers push it up harder: classical words such as 敝司 (bì sī, our humble company, classical) and 顺颂商祺 (shùn sòng shāng qí, wishing your business well, classical) that belong to a printed letter, and sound stiff in a message.
Every marker, its weight and its suggested swap are printed in the checker's file, and every marker in the drafts below is highlighted when you open them. If you think a weight is wrong, the rules are there to argue with.
Self-studyWhat a rule list cannot judge2 min▶
The checker sees words, not sentences. It cannot judge grammar, whether a sentence says what you meant, the order of a request, or a marker that is not on its list. A draft can sit in the right band and still be rude, wrong or confusing. Use it to catch the register mistakes learners make most, and then read the message once more as the person receiving it.
The perfect letter on WeChat. A constructed case with a familiar shape. A Lumen manager, keen to be respectful, copied a formal letter template into WeChat for a simple meeting confirmation. Manager Wang replied with a thumbs-up and, later, to a colleague, that the new partner "writes like a government notice". Nobody was offended. It simply made the relationship feel more distant than it was.
Five drafts, three channels, then your own
★ 26 min · the main eventThe table is computed when the page loads, from the five drafts and the 43 markers. Each row is one way of writing the same message; each column is a channel with its band; each cell is the fit. Open the drafts underneath to see every marker highlighted, then paste a draft of your own into the checker below and choose where it is going.
Read the diagonal first. The friend-style note fits the colleague chat, the polite WeChat fits WeChat, the formal email fits email, and each scores poorly everywhere else. Then read the last row, the one that tried to be as formal as possible.
Move the literal translation into the WeChat band with three swaps. The checker opens with the word-for-word draft loaded. Make these three changes, choose the WeChat channel, and check again.
Each draft fits one channel
5 min liveThe numbers below are what the bench computes on the printed drafts, written down so they can be argued with after class.
LiveFinding 1: register is chosen per channel2 min▶
Each well-judged draft scores 100 in its own channel and loses points in the other two. The polite WeChat, at index 55, is exactly right for Manager Wang on WeChat and too casual for a first formal email (55). The formal email, at 82, is right for email and stiff on WeChat (58). There is no single "correct level of formality"; there is a correct one for each channel, and the question to ask before writing is where the message is going.
LiveFinding 2: the word-for-word translation is close, and three swaps fix it2 min▶
A draft translated directly from polite English lands at index 38: not rude, but casual, because English "you" becomes 你 (nǐ, you) and every English question becomes a 吗 (ma, question particle) question. It is just below the WeChat band. The three swaps in the build-along, an addressed greeting with 您 (nín, you, polite), a request with 烦请 (fánqǐng, may I trouble you to), and a statement instead of a 吗 (ma, question particle) question, move it to 59, inside the band, without making it stiff.
Polishing everything overshoots even email
4 min liveThe tempting fix for "too casual" is to make everything as formal as possible. The bench counts the result: a draft built from classical letter phrases reaches index 100, scores 4 on WeChat, and is too stiff even for a formal email (76), because the email band has a ceiling at 92.
LiveWhy more formal is not more polite2 min▶
Politeness in a business message is fit: the reader feels addressed the way their role and the channel lead them to expect. Classical words such as 敝司 (bì sī, our humble company, classical) and 鄙人 (bǐrén, this humble person, classical) still appear in ceremonial letters, but in an email they put distance between writer and reader, and on WeChat they read as a joke or as a template pasted without thought. The bench's ceiling at 92 is the professional norm made countable: past a certain point, formality stops signalling respect and starts signalling distance.
Self-studyThe honest nuance: when the classical words are right2 min▶
Printed invitations, formal notices and ceremonial letters still use classical closings, and a learner should recognise them. The checker's band is for business email and messages, which is where most of your writing will go. If you are writing a printed invitation to a signing ceremony, the classical register is the right one, and the checker's email band does not apply; it says so in its notes.
The template that went too far. A constructed case. Lumen's first contract email to Shanghai was drafted from a letter template found online, with 兹 (zī, hereby) in the first line and 顺颂商祺 (shùn sòng shāng qí, wishing your business well, classical) as the closing. Manager Wang answered in two plain lines. The second email, at the formal-email band's middle, got a reply with three questions in it: the first sign of a working relationship.
Before session 4
30 min- Check three real drafts from your own work, each against the channel it was actually going to. Write down the index and the fit.
- Rewrite one for a different channel: a formal email as a WeChat message, or the reverse, and bring both into its band.
- Find one marker the checker missed in a real message you received: a word that made it feel casual or stiff that is not on the list. Session 4 starts with the list you bring.
- Bring a number from a report: a growth figure you would present. Session 4 is about saying it, with 同比 (tóngbǐ, year on year) and 环比 (huánbǐ, period on period).
Three questions
Clear all three and session 3 gets stamped in your passport.
1 · The polite WeChat draft scores 100 on WeChat and 55 as a formal email. What does that say about register?
Each draft on the bench fits exactly one channel. There is no single correct level of formality, only a correct one for each place a message goes.
2 · A draft translated word for word from polite English lands at index 38, just under the WeChat band. What moves it in without making it stiff?
English "you" and English questions translate into the casual forms by default. Fixing those three habits does most of the work; adding classical phrases overshoots.
3 · Why does the "polish everything" draft score only 76 even as a formal email?
The anti-lever: the obvious fix for "too casual" is "as formal as possible", and it fails in every channel. Formal emails are formal; they are not ceremonial letters.
What this session teaches, and where it came from
Every fact on this page, and its verification tier, is recorded in the course's source map.
Session 3 cheat sheet · pin this
Register is how you say it; session 4 is what you say when the content is numbers. Presenting results in Chinese uses 同比 (tóngbǐ, year on year) and 环比 (huánbǐ, period on period), two words English speakers mix up, and a growth figure said with the wrong one changes what the board hears.